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Isabel Fontes's avatar

I found this to be a beautifully restrained story of love, pride, and quiet endurance. The atmosphere feels vivid and lived-in, and the prose carries a deep emotional undercurrent. What stayed with me most was the silence between the characters — heavy with devotion, grief, and unspoken fear.

Adrienne H. Lee's avatar

This story took me on a journey... so many emotions. And so visceral. Very well done.

DBHWriter's avatar

Thank you very much. s

Alex Merola's avatar

This is so awesome. The weight of disability and poverty during/because of industrialism is so vivid in your writing. I simply have to read more. Thank you so much for this poignant story.

azia archer's avatar

Couldn’t agree more! What a talent!

DBHWriter's avatar

Thank tou so much.